En réponse à Joel <[log in to unmask]>:

> I never really understood fully clauses and that sort of grammar, so in
> my
> unseeing blindness, i attempted to construct a clause system.
> Basically,
> you enclose the clause in ""  if I am trying to say, "The man
> that
> john hit yesterday is angry" Using that in English is should turn out to
> be
> "Nihk The man john his yesterday il is angry". You follow?  I hope I've
> got
> the right idea with clauses here.

Partly. Indeed, I think using two words to enclose a subclause is a good idea.
The only problem I see in your system is: how do you know which noun of the
subclause is the subject of the verb of the principal clause?

I mean, if I take your example: "Nihk the man John hit yesterday il is angry".
Who is angry? The man, or John? It could be both, since nothing outside the
subclause shows which is the subject of "is angry". A way you could solve this
problem is to use different enclosing words depending on whether the antecedent
(that's to say, the noun to which the subclause is added) is the subject or the
object of the subclause. For instance, with your idea, "nihk... li" would mark
that the object is the antecedent, while for instance "nes... li" would mark
that the subject is the antecedent.

With this idea, you would construct things that way:
"Nihk John hit the man yesterday il is angry": The man that John hit yesterday
is angry.
"Nes John hit the man yesterday il is angry": John, who hit the man yesterday,
is angry.

But usually, languages (including English) solve this problem by putting the
antecedent in the principal clause (In "the man (that John hit yesterday) is
angry", "the man" is in the principal clause "the man is angry"). With your
idea, the construction would be:
"The man nihk John hit yesterday il is angry" (or maybe "the man nihk John hit
him yesterday il is angry", with "him" reminding the function of "the man" in
the subclause).

In fact, I prefer your first idea, of putting the antecedent in the subclause
instead of the principal clause, but since you admit yourself that you don't
understand much of subclauses, maybe you should begin with an easier system (I
mean, more similar to English). Once you've mastered this simple one and
understood really how it works, you can begin doing more original things.

> Any help or criticism is helpful, be reminded, I have NO idea what I'm
> talking about!

Well, simply speaking, making subclauses is complexifying a sentence by
replacing what should be noun phrases or adjectives by verbal sentences. For
instance, a relative subclause ("The man (that John hit yesterday)") is really
a complex adjective with a verb inside (like an adjective, this subclause is
used to qualify a noun). In "I said (that John hit the man yesterday)", "that
John hit the man yesterday" is really the object of the verb "said" (see
something like: "I said the truth", where "the truth" is obviously the object),
but an object with a verb inside. In the sentence "I am angry (because John hit
the man yesterday)", "because John hit the man yesterday" is really a
circonstancial complement (comparable to "for that reason" in "I am angry for
that reason"), but with a verb inside.

So try to remember this simple idea: a subclause is a verbal sentence used to
replace a noun phrase or an adjective. When you understood that, you understood
70% of what's going on with subclauses.


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