One of my favorite poems by Li Bai is the following, which
I've decided to use to build my Phaleran vocabulary and
to develop a sense of how Phaleran poetics is fashioned.
(To the latter end, this is only a partial answer:  it's
more or less a prose translation with a few poetic features.)
Unfortunately, I broke the cardinal rule of translating:
translating from a translation.  But alas! I have not
yet learnt Classical Chinese, so my translation will have
to stand as is until that time.  I'd be interested to see
what other people did with the same poem, and questions
and critiques would be welcome.

Drinking Alone Under the Moon

A jug of wine amidst the flowers:
drinking alone, with no friend near.
Raising my cup, I beckon the bright moon;
My shadow included, we're a party of three.
Although the moon's unused to drinking,
And the shadow only apes my every move,
For the moment I'll just take them as they are,
Enjoying spring when it is here.
Reeling shadow, swaying moon,
Attend my dance and song.
Still sober, we rejoice together;
Drunk, each takes his leave.
To seal forever such a friendship,
Let's rendezvous beyond the Milky Way.

Uxeik lr nasegwanti seiweristi

Teteus ouwu lumxek iphix:
Tsheofk yor pacusuo seiweristi.
r xoagwasti, lauyxei rphiswandi
smaiswsts naiorwa, hwaya eo myntll.
Foi, uxei eoi seiweus othmmints,
hai naiorw' aphs pent k'eahusyossi,
swongan siw' l ainkoswalts,
hai Euwes hwo polwamilts.
iwainaiorwa, hluruxei,
ebaxuo lurekawoi azhrismi.
Eioxermts, tix phixaiormts;
rk'urintms, thnrintms.
 ti mearswa siw' l hye,
uwenalga mblakrn er.

Teteus [1]  ouwu   lumxek [2] iphix:
PL.flower.DAT amidst wine.DUR     jug

Tsheofk  yor     pacusuo      seiweristi.
friend.DUR without lonliness.DAT drink-alcohol.INTR.1SgProgRe.S

r  xoagwasti,           lauyxei [3] rphiswandi
cup raise.REL.1SgProgRe.S bright-moon  call-forth.TR.1SgPfRe.S

smaiswsts [4]       naiorwa [5], hwaya eo  myntll [6].
include.TR.1SgProgIr.C shadow.1Sg   1PlEx COP threesome

Foi [7], uxei eoi [8] seiweus     othmmints [9],
true     moon 3SgO    drinking.DAT not-accustom.MID.3SgPfRe.C

hai naiorw' [10] aphs pent       k'eahusyossi,
and shadow.1Sg   1SgO  in-all-ways imitate.TR.3SgProgRe.S

swongan siw' l [11] ainkoswalts [12],
now     this like    accept.TR.1SgProsRe.C

hai Euwes [13] hwo    polwamilts.
and spring     1SgDat enjoy.MID.1SgProsRe.C

iwaionaiorwa,        hluruxei,
unsteady-shadow.1Sg  sway-moon

ebaxuo   lurekawoi     azhrismi [14].
song.DAT dance.DAT.and wait-upon.INTR.3PlProgRe.S

Eioxermtan [15],         tix    phixaiormtan;
be-sober.INTR.3PlProgIr.Q together rejoice.3PlProgIr.Q

rk'urintms,             thnrintms. [16]
be-drunk.INTR.3PlProgIr.C take-leave.INTR.3PlPfIr.C

 ti     mearswa [17] siw' l   hye,
so-that seal.TR       this like friendship

uwenalga [18]  mblakrn [19] er.
meet-up.1PLImp milk-ribbon     beyond

[1] In poetry, and sometimes in prose, the dative
case ending, normally -uo, can alternate with the
more archaic - depending on whether the following
word begins with a vowel.
[2] The so-called "partitive" durative case.
[3] Because Phaleran has no class of adjectives,
and must nominalize or use unwieldy relative clauses,
it is not unusual for Phaleran poets to use compounds,
here "bright-moon", which undergoes regular contraction
rules of the roots _lauy-_ and _uxei_.  This is also
motivated by imitation of C'ali poetics, which can
make use of a distinct class of adjectives.
[4] lit. "were I to include", in the irrealis mode.
[5] _naior_, "shadow", belongs to the class of
inherently possessed nouns, and so must receive a
possessor.  cf. _r_, which takes no such possession.
[6] From C'ali _nt'ell_, "group, company", and
Phaleran _my_ "three".  In its use in Phaleran,
the initial n- has been lost due to reassociation
(like English napron > apron) but is preserved in
forms like this one where it serves to prevent hiatus.
[7] Not a conjunction, but an adverb:  "although,
admittedly, certainly".
[8] Proximative pronoun used, since the moon
is more topical than other nouns previously mentioned.
[9] The idiom _eoi othmmi_ "to unaccustom onself" can
be used in a passive sense when no agent is obviously
acting upon the patient.
[10] short vowels can optionally be elided in
every day speech when to do so would avoid hiatus.
[11] From the demonstrative _siwo_ "this" and _gan_
"now" (< C'ali _gn_ "here").   _l_ "like"
alternates with __ depending on whether the
following word begins with a consonant.
[12] The cognitive evidentiality suffix here can
imply something like "I suppose":  "I suppose I
will accept them as they are". In general, it
implies a kind of hesitancy over the claim, but
one is less removed from the claim than the
[13] Not early in the year, but the beginning of
the growing season.
[14] _azhri_ /a'Seri/ "to wait upon" (< dial. azyeari_
"to serve") does not have the class connotations that
standard Phaleran _gethari_ (+dat.) "to attend, wait
upon" does.
[15] The use of irrealis in both clauses closely
connects the two without use of a formal conjunction.
Note also the change to quotative evidentiality (in -(e)n):
this phrase would strike the Phaleran ear with the
ring of a proverb, and so it must be marked as having
been "hearsay" knowledge.
[16] The shift to the perfect aspect is no accident:
the sense is "at that point that we realize we've
become drunk, that's when we suppose we take our leave."
[17] The infinitival purpose clause: lit. "that to
bind, seal"
[18] The prospective imperative.
[19] A calque of "Milk-colored ribbon" which the
Phalerans have adopted from the C'ali.  More common
is _K'urnuo eufa_ "K'urnu's belt".

be alone                        naseri
under                           lr
drink alcoholic substance       seiweari, seiweri
drinking                        seiweus
jug, pitcher                    ipheix
wine                            lumax
amidst                          ouwu (+dat.)
flowers                         teus
be alone                        pacri
friend, companion               tsheofa
near                            oracei
raise, lift up                  xoaswa
cup                             r
beckon, call forth              rphiswa
be bright                       lauyri
moon                            uxei
shadow                          naior
include                         smaiswa
party, group                    tll
threesome                       myntll
although                        foi
be unaccustomed, unused         eoi othmmi (to, +dat.)
imitate                         k'eahsyo
in all ways                     pent
movement                        fmu
for the moment, at this point   swongan
accept                          ainkoswa
how                             t'r
enjoy                           polwami
spring                          Euwe
be here                         txari
walk unsteadily                 iwaiori
sway                            hluri
wait upon, attend               zhri
dance                           lureka
song                            ebax
be sober                        eioxeri
rejoice                         phxaiori
together                        tix
become intoxicated by alcohol   rk'uri
take leave, part                thnri
bind, seal                      mearswa
friendship                      hye
rendezvous, meet up again       uwenari
beyond                          er
Milky Way                       mblakrnu

Thomas Wier
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