On Mon, 10 Nov 2014 09:02:43 -0800, Sylvia Sotomayor <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > >Having failed to get through all of Gary Shannon's list of sentences, I >have spent the last few months revising everything again. Some languages (such as clause-chaining ones) are just hard to translate to/from English. >Here is a link to the latest: http://kelen.conlang.org/archives/4143 They look quite different. You haven't added another verb? >I tested the revisions by translating the North Wind and the Sun. Between >today and mid-December there will be at least two blog posts per week >discussing the new translation. > >Today's post contains the new translation and the older translation for >comparison purposes. > >Let me know what you think! >-S > >-- >Sylvia Sotomayor > >The sooner I fall behind the more time I have to catch up.